I Want To Be a Loser
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What is your problem, then? Be a loser.
I despise competition
I am not going to fight you for the first place
It is too crowded
I am taking the last one
At least it will be only mine
If you want to score
Score
Take everything
In a match “15:Love”
I will take Love
I will take Love any day
No, it does not depend on anything
There is nothing bigger than Love
If you want to play
Come and play with me
I will play to lose
That is my goal
That is my objective
I enjoy the process, not the end
In the end, game is over
Fun is over, you have to leave
When you leave, take everything
But leave me your Love
Point Zero
When you win
When you are happy
Counting your points?
I will be happy having my point Zero
I am not good with math
I find it tedious
In the game of Life
At the end
I will lose again
I will be dead
I will become Nothing
I will become ZERO
But when I was alive
At least I had
LOVE
I did not have to count
Or account
I left ALL to others
I want to be a loser
One and the only
Having my place for myself
At the end
Nobody fights to be the first to die
I want to be a loser
So, what was your problem?
I was confused
I did not understand the rules of the game
The rules are always made up on the spot
Never explained
Obscured by numbers, words
That is the whole point
To figure out
what you are playing
who with
what for
Now I know
And, yes,
I want to be a loser
I want to lose my dependence
On your opinions
On your rules
On your expectations
On anything
I will lose fear
Of poverty
Of being ill
Of …
I will lose and I will keep losing
My speed with which
I was rushing to my grave
I will be there,
But I will be the last to arrive
Yes, I will be late
I will lose respect of
Others?
Death?
Does it matter?
Does anything matter at all?
I will lose all my sense…
And then…
I will see
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Neither to play to win nor to consider to lose is good. Why be caught up in it at all? Why play enough to sense losing OR winning? Why buy into the game of win/lose? But, if it pleases you . . .
And it's an impressive poem. Especially this:
"I will lose all my sense…
And then…
I will see"
Because, next to love, to see is best. . . in every sense of the word.
That music is hauntingly lovely, the illustrations sublime.
I've been missing seeing YOU.
I quickly read over, ’Fine-tuning’, but did not study it. The advice looks like it is aimed at the non-fiction, how-to or why-to’s that will garner lots of hits. Hence generating a cash flow stream – very practical.
Those are some attractive titles you mention. I like them.
Wishing you the energy you need to pursue the activities that fill your spirit.
Dance.
Love this. I also like those ‘headlines’ in your response to mckbirdbks, but I wonder whether something a little more quirky would be more ‘you’.
Maybe a paraphrase, like “A loser always wins”.
In fact, I think a paraphrase on a higher level might do the trick, (although, in becoming a longer line, perhaps it runs counter to the ‘less is more’ rationale you’re here espousing..?)
Anyway, to paraphrase Alfred Lord Tennyson’s famous lines, and infuse them with a little kallini-ness, I offer,
“tis better to have played and lost, than to have never played at all...”
Such an epic poem. Filled with pain, accepting, acknowledging the battle is lost. I can't decide if I'm a loser though. I don't feel like one...
Haha, every guy from Australia is called Wayne!
I'm not an Australian, I'm happy to be here, but will always be proud to be a New Zealander. In NZ, anytime you wanted to make a generic reference to an Aussie guy, you'd just say "Wayne". eg, someone you've never met, standing beside you, trying to pronounce the name of an unfamiliar beer, you'd just wink at your mates and say "Looks like Wayne's having trouble.."
The beer reference is instructive. The top selling brew in Queensland, where I live, is called XXXX. Seriously, XXXX. Pronounced Fourex. I know I'll probably get flamed for saying it, but Australia's known as a country of 'wide open spaces', and up here in the tropics, some of those are between the ears...
FYI, back in OZ, Wayne will be known to his mates as Wazza, (soft 'z', not like in pizza). His mates are likely to have equally popular Aussie names like Daryl, or Barry (and be called Daz and Baz..)
If you'd like to get an idea of the local 'culcha', check out this hub:
http://writeronline.hubpages.com/hub/Why-The-Urban
Read it all if you want a laugh, but in particular the section about the Queensland Cane Toad; and Do Not Miss the animated story of Baz and Daz. Funnily enough, it's a poignant story of loss....
I look forward to your reaction... lol.
Hi Svetlana – my promised comment –
I have not read it for a 2nd time. But this means it is a highly successful poem, arousing extreme emotion of sadness.
I can’t decide if it is satire or melancholy, but it is certainly excellent in both.
I normally interpret the poet as well – not necessarily who she/he is, but just for rating – You are certainly able to project emotion and a clear message. Excellent technique.
Theme: I can really not identify. For me life is not about winning and losing, although we win and lose all kinds of things every day of our lives. For me life is about living and dying. I’m now busy with my 7th on this planet. Not afraid of dying; but looking forward to the next life. Perhaps I will then have the opportunity to hate competition. I love to compete, most of the time with my own idea of the achievable.
Presentation: Impressive and artistic, Svetlana-style.
Beautiful song. Awaken severe sadness buried in the soul – the amount of tears in the soul normally surprises the dumper. I will not listen to it again. I’ve learnt how to not allow music to steal my joy.
Take care, Svetlana. Enjoy your writing! And thanks for demanding proper comments on your hubs. I wish we could have done it like this all the time.
Separate response to your words on sharing coffee with Wayne:
If you were wearing red, or even if there was only a breeze blowing, then all is revealed. A toast to the man.
Separate comment on your reference to branding and positioning:
You spoke of wanting to cash in on ‘my "kallini-ness" or wonderfulness’.
The key in positioning is to encapsulate a uniqueness, in a memorable way. A powerful way to do this is to re-work a well known phrase or colloquialism; bend it to the needs of the brand.
I realise that English is not your first language, so I hope the play on the well-known phrase I’m proposing for your brand statement doesn’t elude you, (let me know if it does and I’ll explain):
“kallini-ness is next to Godliness”
:)
I feel that I have just met the most incredible woman. And I am so much richer now. Thought-provoking does not do your work justice, but you certainly have me thinking. I think at this point I can only say, thank you for being you, and for sharing you with us.
Svetlana - no explanations needed; certainly not for your lines I quoted: ". . then. . I will see". I added my comment to it as its importance struck me. That's what comments do, basically,don't they? - present a reader's response about something that's been mentioned by the author which generates thought along mutual or personal lines. Yours are a pleasure to read and worthwhile to contemplate.
Nice that you give further reading references to help with grasping meanings. I will read it soon.
My circulation is currently less: It's probably no surprise if I mention that I'm reading more poetry than I've read since school, along with other mundane impositions.
I'm so pleased you were thinking about me.
Seems like a trip to Toronto is in order. I will need to pack for the winter, and plan to use my mind and engage in stimulating coversation. OF course, I will need to meet Colin, as I hold him in high esteem. I will bring cash, because I'm not sure of the value of our wonderfullness. You may get a better exchange rate. The cult isn't what it's cracked up to be, impossible to plan for the future when they see none. Novia Scotia; I would like to say I've been there. And, of course, to meet Daniel and visit his lions den. Sounds like an adventure...
who are u...........
u r deeply sinked in love.....
its not a loss at all....and it is called so is bcoz no one knows the rules of love game
i am totally emotional and in touch to u........if its writeen by u...i love u...not as a girl or a boy...but as a person who is in touch to god....
thanku for this enlightenment
I loved the first one especially. "15:Love"... I used to play tennis. I was also very competitive in school. The system taught me to be. I don't compete anymore.... At least, I don't think so really.
Yes... This is me spamming your hubs again. Each comment is code for "This hub/your writing means something to me". Whatever that means... ;)
I lose with you
Oh my I think I found my heart, the music, the visions, the imagery, the words you've expressed. You have class and have fully expressed it here on this very hub.
Wow, I definitely need to read more of your style of writing.
I too love poetry & discovered my gift as a child in grade school or shall I say it was discovered by one of my caring teachers back then & who helped me to cultivate as well as learn how to embrace such a great gift.
You have a way with words that dazzles my mind into a sorta trance & after reading your beautiful poem to be lead to a totally entrancing song just topped it off entirely.
I wish for a second there I wasn't married & even if you weren't as well maybe, just maybe our words could make love lol, that's the kind feeling I'm left with here after viewing which is just amazing.
You surely deserve a hub award for this one, yes indeed. Voted up on all levels, because the funny thing is your word play twisted my view as well from beginning to end with the love spin & paradox you played with there. this one I'm adding to my sharing tools on the Cloud.
Thanks so very much for such a beautiful illustration on how to present a powerful Hub. Oh and thanks for reading my hub a well, its nice to meet ya Kallini your new found hub pal & fan CloudExplorer.
You said alot and I'm glad you said it. It was a poem that did more than rhyme, it made sense.
Sounds like You had a long talk with Nietzsche before writing this. Indeed losing our baggage is important, in our own personal quest of becoming who we are. (That's just my opinion.)
I don't know about losing though ... or winning. There's nothing to win and nothing to lose - it's all perception. We give meaning to everything, in any way we wish.
Personally I could care less about winning or losing. I care about walking my road, that's all. A Warrior and a Hunter just follow the trail - winning and losing is for ... sumo wrestlers maybe ...
I appreciate your passion : )
May Wakan Tanka guide your path. Cheers!
It's tough when you can only see the words I wrote and not the smile on my face. Haha ... I do love our conversations!
All the very best, Kallini!
It was Mr Happy who suggested I read your poem and I am so glad he did. Your words just fit magically into a spiritual jigsaw puzzle that creates a very special experience. Thank you.
Oh no, you are making me think. I will have to read this one several times.
I like the first photograph of the shell. The blue color works well on my monitor.
Whether you invented the concept or not you have made me think with this hub. That is not an easy thing to do.
I just wanted to make a quick note here: Orange is what's "in" this year: http://online.wsj.com/article/SB100014240529702049
No coincidences. : )
Hey Mr. Happy,
I have never used the Wall Street Journal for fashion tips. I would not have guessed they paid attention to fashion trends; but, I guess it makes some sort of sense.
Haha Mr. Leroy, indeed I do not get my fashion tips from Wall St. Journal usually.
I prefer fashion shows actually.
Here's some Orange in Alexander McQueen's collection for this year: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UIjf9QMbg_w&feature
Dior certainly has Orange: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3j3VyIxScr0&feature (Dior's collection and the entire show for spring/summer 2012, was pretty formidable in my opinion.)
Prada joined-in on the Orange flavor too (not that much but I love Prada ... haha): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Y7ELirvWDA&feature
Anyway ... that's how I get my fashion tips : )
Cheers!
I love the music..
I woun't lie - I have at least three or four friends who call me either Doctor or Dr. Dre ... there are no coincidences in my world.
Regarding fashion, it's art for me ... I appreciate some of the creations : )
Cheers indeed!
Nice writing here. I enjoy reading a different perspective on daily life.
























mckbirdbks Level 8 Commenter 6 months ago
Only a winner at the game of life could write a piece of poetry with this message. The music was so graceful. The picture you choose reveals the artist within. You display a new clarity.